

my mind is a fickle thingI can't seem to gather my thoughts you're face always racing through my mind it's funny how that happens when you've never seen mine what is this thing...it's certainly not love can it be admiration? could it be hopeful wishing that I could be more like you? to not care what others think of me? of thoughts of wanting to be free? whatever it is I'm stuck with a picture of your face pinned to my soul and...no way to ever tell you how beautiful you really are.my mind is a fickle thing


Fade To Black 'song'I don't know how long I've been here I've stopped counting the days your face is disappearing fading to a forgotten place my mind it wanders my heart it cries but still I can't rememberFade To Black 'song'
the path to where the forgotten lies
(chorus)
My heart it bleeds
my mind it screams I don't know how much further I can go with this pain this fear I've created all alone
No-one hears my voice no-one sees my face no matter how hard I try I cannot shine through this fog of grey invisible is what I am to all who look past me &n
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"Anything less than mad passionate love is a waste of time.... and im incapable of anything, so I MUST be a waste of time!! "
Have you looked into the Deviation ThumbShare at all yet? Not everyone there is looking for poetry/prose, but it is still a good way to get your stuff out there and seen by other people. I don't have many pageviews/favs/watches myself, but I doubled what I did have by using the ThumbShare.
There are also some groups designed to help writers that might be worth looking into, I haven't tried any myself, but ^MinorKey has a list on his page.
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now pull the stitches
rip the seams
pull out the insides
silence the screams
but there's no escaping
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